Tuesday, September 28, 2021

The story of The Ten Suns

 Hi bloggers, 

This blog post will be all about the story of the Ten Suns. . It is also like kind of writing so sit back and relax.  


Once there were ten suns that take turns bringing light and warms to the earth. Each day one of the suns would travel east to west in the sky. The suns liked being together and after a while the didn't want to take turns going and coming back. So all of the ten suns traveled together. They were very happy traveling together but the people the lived on earth were very very hot and the plants and trees died and all the water was dried up. The people on earth begged their emperor to tell the suns not to do this ever again because it was getting way to hot. When the emperor told them that they should stop the suns didn't listen because the liked traveling together. He kept asking them again and again to tell them to stop but the wouldn't listen. So he told them that the plants and tress were not growing and the people on earth had no food, and the animals didn't have food to eat just from the suns traveling altogether. But they still  did not  listen. So the emperor sent his most bravest and cleaver archer to go and try and tell them too stop traveling together.  The archer named Yi wore thick clothing to protect him self from the heat with bows and arrows on his back with his shield.  Yi asked them if they could stop traveling together but the did not wanna listen to him. He walked closer and closer to the suns and he had to put his shield in front of him. After a while the suns realized how hot it was getting on earth for the people.  He told them how they could stay together in the sky. And one by one the suns began to break into pieces. The tiny pieces spread them selves our in different directions till one out of the ten suns were left. The tiny pieces sparkled threw out the night sky. And earth cam alive a last. 

                                                         The End

1 comment:

  1. Ka pai Alyssa. I think this is a great retelling of the story. Does it remind you of any other stories? When you have a lot of text like this maybe you could make some key words or phrases stand out my changing the colour, making them bold or making them bigger? If you wanted to do that you could do a before and after screenshot to compare.

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